Simon the Bully - Character Descriptions

Room 4 have been writing character descriptions.  Miss G read us a fictional (made up) story about a boy named Simon, who was a bully.  We had to use the information from the story to write our own character descriptions.

Please leave a comment and tell us what you think about our writing.  We would like to know what you think we have done well and also things we could improve on.

Thank you :)

Simon the Bully by Sean

Simon is a 9 year old very tall loner. Simon is a Bully and targets kids younger than him.

His parents are busy all the time and spends weekends at his grandmars.Simon doesn’t play sport and has no friends.

He has curly brown hair and green eyes and doesn’t know how to make friends.

I feel sorry for Simon because he has no friends I hope he makes a change.

By Sean.   

Simon the Bully by Lydia

Simon is a Bully. He enjoys hurting people. Every little kid at his school is frightened of him.                         

Simon has curly hair and green eyes. He is quite tall for his age and towers over most people in his class. He has no friends and is very lonely at school and at home, Simon is unhappy and always wears a frown. He is nine years old, Simon can’t join any sports teams because his parents work full time. Simon has to stay at his Grandmas in the weekends and plays video games and watches TV by himself.

Simon wants to go camping with his Dad. He thinks it would be fun because they could go hiking, fishing and heaps more, but sadly he has no friends to join them.

I hope Simon can find time to spend with his parents.

By Lydia

Simon the Bully by Lylekah

Simon is a nonliked person, but only because he is a bully. He is very selfish and often angry.

His favourite thing to do is hurt others but Simon has a big advantage on smaller kids because of his height. He likes to feel important so when people stand up to him gets really embarrassed sometimes feels jealous because everyone has friends but him.

I think one of the reasons Simon is angry is because his parents don’t have time for him. They work long hours and he has to go to his grandma’s. He also wants to go camping with his dad but has no friends to go with.

Simon can’t join sports teams and can’t interact with people very well. Simon is a bad natured person. I think Simon should be given a chance to be friends with someone.

By Lylekah.

Simon the Bully by Isabella

Simon is a Bully.  He likes to push people around, because it makes feel powerful. 

Since he is a Bully, he has no friends and his parents are very busy with work.  Simon is a very lonely person, which wants to spend more time with his parents more often.

Simon is tall which makes little kids scared of him.  He also has brown curly hair and green eyes.  He is a very unhappy person who scowls most of the time.  He is nine years old.

Simon doesn’t play sport because his parents are busy, but does play a lot of video games. 

I hope Simon gets a friend.

That’s Simon the lonely bully

By Isabella        

Holiday homes for tadpoles and frogs????

Wanted:  Temporary accommodation for our tadpoles and frog during the holidays.  Ideally these would go to different homes.  If parents (rather than students) could let me know, that would be great.

Tadpoles are easy care and don't eat much ..... blanched lettuce leaves are doing the trick at the moment.

The frog requires living insects to be collected and put in the tank ... although we are not sure when or if it is actually eating them.  The good news is that the froglet is still alive.  RIP Matilda, who we lost to unknown reasons last weekend :(

The frog tank - it has a lid, so nothing can escape :)

The tadpoles .....

Baptism

Congratulations to the students who were baptised at the Sacred Heart Basilica on Sunday 10th of April.  Lydia, Hamish and Carl from Room 4 are also preparing for their First Communion too.  Well done!!!