Monday, March 12, 2012

The Crazy World by Amber

One day there were two sisters called Crystal and Angel, they were both nine years old.  Their parents had to go to a work doo and took the two sisters to their Granny’s for a few hours. 
The sisters didn’t like going grannies.  When they got there they went to the dairy down the road to buy some lollies.  But when they got to the dairy the strangest thing happened, they saw an arrow saying, “Follow this path.”  So they did path.

They walked for a while until they saw a wheel saying, “Spin me.”  So they spun it and it landed on a sentence saying, “A big spider the size of a house will come.”  So what happened? A giant spider, the size of a double storied house came along and the spider said, “Hop on and I’ll take you to the coolest place on earth for kids.”

 So, after a while they saw a palace called Candy City where all your dreams come true!  There was a human egg with a black hat on.    There also were giant scoops of ice-cream on one side and chocolate and candy on the other.  In the middle they saw pink carpet (their favourite colour) coming down with strange animals on the side of it.  There was a unicorn with a dog’s tail and wings made out of cat’s whiskers.  Never before have you seen things like this.  It was amazing.

They soon got bored of this place and decided to go back. Their Mum and Dad passed them and then picked them up to go home.  When they got home there was a note saying, “If you want to see us again, go to your backyard, into your tree hut and there will be some instructions to see us again.  Hope you enjoy your hunt.”  From egg and spider.  They never told anyone it was their little secret.

By Amber

3 comments:

  1. Nice Work Amber. I like your story it is so cool. Keep it up from Penny

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  2. Nice job Amber. Your story is very interesting. From Maddie

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  3. WOW!!! what an amazing imagination you have Miss Amber, I really enjoyed your story that I felt like I was there... Please write more interesting stories for me. From Jo.

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