Monday, June 24, 2013

Magical Monster Dream


David had a friend named Hailey and she was the same age as him (11). He also had a little sister named Ally and she was 7. One day David was watching TV with Hailey.  “I love the boxing channel, can we watch that?” asked Hailey. “Maybe,” said David.

After a few minutes, they heard screaming. It sounded like David’s 7yr old sister Ally. They rushed to her room but Ally was not there. They looked under her bed but when they did they got sucked into a portal and off to a magical world.
 
“Maybe the person who took Ally came through here?” said David, unsure of it. They went through the forest and they found footsteps and followed them. The footsteps stopped at an entrance to dark, dark cave.

They both went in and they were terrified when they heard screaming. “This way!” shouted Hailey. They ran towards the sound and found Ally tied up in rope and the Devil getting his tea ready. Hailey went to go get Ally and David went to fight the Devil with a shovel. He fought the Devil till he gave up. “Is that all you’ve got?” asked David. He dodged the big fork the Devil had. The devil went down and then POP! He popped out of nowhere and cornered him. Hailey said to Ally, “Stay right here,” Ally nodded.

Then Hailey picked up a huge spoon and came up behind the devil and WHACK, the Devil was knocked out. It gave them enough time to get away but ….  “Wake up, wake up,” said Ally. “You are alive!” said David in surprise. Ally replied, “I was always alive. What happened to you?” “Great it was all a dream “Or was it.” Dun dun dun….
 
 

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