Monday, June 11, 2012

10 word creative story by Ashlei

Just two days ago Mr. Johnson was caught on tape opening a treasure chest. He searched through it for about ten minutes and BAM! He pulled out a touch screen cellphone and he turned it on. Then he called the school to say he needed a reliever.  
Mr. Johnson was the richest man in the world so about one year ago he bought a secret helicopter. On this day he called his pilot to come from the jungle. When he picked him up from the jungle the emergency alarm started going off and they crashed into a cliff and had to go to hospital. Mr. Johnson was in a coma but he suddenly woke up and he asked the nurse to make him a hot Milo. He looked out the window and saw a fish in the sea and he turned around and fell back asleep. Then he stopped breathing and the nurse had to pull his plug. Then he died.


By Ashlei S-M     

3 comments:

  1. What an fantastic story Ashlei it was really good. You are very good at doing the 10 word thing aren't you?
    From Amber.

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  2. Great job Ashlei!!! your Awsome at writing creatve stories!!!
    from Quinn!!!:D

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  3. nice job ashlei i really like the set up for your story its the 1st person with the 10 worded story from nomhle

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