Monday, June 11, 2012

Red poem by Maddy F


Blood racing down your face.

Hearts beating all the time.

Mr Gander’s red sports car racing.

Love happening all the time. 

People screaming really loud.

Paper rustling as loud as the wind.

Tomato sauce on chips.  

A hot dog with sauce.

Chocolate raspberry sauce.

Red spray paint, spraying the walls. 

Red paper on the wall.

Red rose petals on the ground.

Red will make you have fun.

By Maddy F.

5 comments:

  1. I like your story maddy From Maddy

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  2. I like red and you did the best red poem I have ever read before. Yes I think red is a fun colour too.Hope to hear from you soon!! :)
    From Amber.

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  3. awsome as sounds great love it
    from gemyn

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