Then I raced to my bike and put my helmet on. My cousin Isabella was cheering for me so I waved at her and her friends while I was biking. We had to bike 3 laps for the competitive race.
Next I had to run 2 laps around Anzac Square. I ran as fast as I could to try and get 1st place.
Finally I finished. I came 6th place. I was so happy that I finished. I felt so proud of the place I came in, but I was so tired.
By Sophie
Good for you, Sophie - sixth place is a great achievement. I'm pleased you enjoyed competing in the duathlon.
ReplyDeleteWell done for beginning your recount with an orientation (what, when, and where) - perhaps next time you could explain the 'who' as well?
I liked the way you linked your ideas using time connectives (first, then, and next).
Maybe you could check out the Room 1 Blog and read what my students have been writing?
Ka pai, Sophie.
Miss F
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