Monday, May 7, 2012

Golden Coins by Maddie W


Golden Coins

Golden Coins are as bright as the sun

Golden Coins are bumpy like lots of rocks

They are as golden as a gold pencil,

They are as precious as a crystal

Gold is as special as my Mum

By Madeleine





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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 7, 2012 at 6:36 PM

    Cool simile poem.
    From Hayley

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  2. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Hi, what a lovely simile poem

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  3. AnonymousJune 10, 2012 at 11:35 PM

    I like the photo's in your poem, they look so rich and cool. I can't wait to see your other poems or stories they will be so cool!! Keep up the good work.
    From Amber!! :) <3

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