Sunday, May 15, 2011

Simon the Bully - by Carl

Simon is 9 years old and he started his new school 12 months ago.
He has green eyes and brown curly hair.
His parents work all the time so he can not go camping. Simon has no friends because he is a bully. He is tall for his age, and he scares people with his big frown. Simon always pushes people over.
Simon goes to his Grandma’s every weekend because his parents are working long hours. Simon is angry because his parents are too busy.
I feel sorry for Simon because he can’t stop bullying people.
By Carl

3 comments:

  1. good work
    from zoe

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  2. I THINK I AM DOING GOOD AT MY PARAGRAPHS. GOOD JOB CARL

    BY CARL

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  3. Nice work Carl!!! :) By Olivia

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