Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Simon the Bully by Flynn


Simon is a 9 year old bully who is a boy. He doesn’t have a good life. He enjoys pushing people and he has no friends. He towers over kids at his school. He started at the school 1 year ago and still has no friends.

Simon is tall, angry, a loner and he likes watching T.V and playing video games at his grandma’s. His parents are busy and he can’t join a sports team. Simon wants to go hiking and camping with his dad. He can’t have fun and he is a really unhappy person.

I wonder who Simon’s going to pick on next.

By FlynnJ

3 comments:

  1. Good conclusion Flynn
    Thomas

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  2. Flyn I like the way how you said I wonder who simon is going to pick on next? that is one good story. Maybe you could add more info



    BY CARL

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  3. great job flynn i like the part how you said wat simon likes to do

    BY HANNAH AND FAITH

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