Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Simon the Bully by Olivia G


Simon is a nine year old bully that attends a local primary school that he started one year ago.
Simon is very lonely because he doesn’t know how to make friends and his parents don’t have any time to spend with him.
Simon is very tall for his age, he uses his height to scare the other children. He also uses his creepy scowl to warn the people he despises!
He wants to join a sports team but he can’t because his parents work long hours.
In the weekend he goes to his Grandma’s house and all he does is play video games and watch television all by him self!
He wishes to go camping, fishing and hiking with his Dad, but his dad is too busy!
One day Simon went to school and took all his rage and anger with him-he took this out on the new kid – Tim!  Simon pushed Tim off his chair, but the amazing thing is Tim stood up to him. This made Simon extra angry, “What did you do that for?” Tim questioned. “Coz I felt like it,” Simon answered. Tim stood up and said, “Well, well don’t do it again!” Tim quickly moved to a different desk. Simon put his head down and got on with his work looking embarrassed!
I feel sorry for Simon because I think if he really tried he could have a lot of good friends. 
By Olivia

2 comments:

  1. I like your opening sentense

    By Carl

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  2. Nice work keep up the good work. From Penny

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