Room 4 have been writing character descriptions. Miss G read us a fictional (made up) story about a boy named Simon, who was a bully. We had to use the information from the story to write our own character descriptions.
Please leave a comment and tell us what you think about our writing. We would like to know what you think we have done well and also things we could improve on.
Thank you :)
Room 4 these character descriptions are fantastic. I have read the original story, and prefer a lot of these to the original. I can't wait to read your next character descriptions and see if you can transfer what you learnt about character descriptions to your next one. Miss G, I may steal some of your class so I can read their writing more often.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work Room 4